All the people usually guess that the social injustice is when the powerful and rich men take the money of the workers ,normal people or poor people . And maybe these persons are in the correct ,but also the social injustice can be against the rich people ,an example are Venezuela . Here , the government take the money and the companies of the businessmen , after they give a little part of the money to the poor people and the other part going to be in the wallet of the politicians . It is bad too , because the rich people don´t have the fault that some persons does not have money ,they win all they have with their works ,we cant take their money and give to the citizens . But the other reality is that are people that don t have nothing ,why?, because are politicians that steal the money that the rich men pale to the government to help the poor men .
So , in the world exist two extremes :the government that take the money of the rich men and the politicians that steal the money of the poor men .
These two extremes are so bad ,but between these two i have an other idea , an other reality , a reality where the rich people have the money that they won with their work , where the politicians fight for us and does not steal the money , where the help that we have to the poor persons is go to be use in education and other things we need . This idea can be real just if we give our future to GOD ,if we pray .
The social injustice is too when all the people don`t have the same opportunities , opportunities to the education , water , food , a family , opportunities to know about GOD .In my opinion all the persons should to have the same opportunities , if a person can pay betters opportunities that is good , i am agree , but if other people cant pay a better opportunity i thing that the government have to give to these people basics opportunities , an example is France . In this country all the human rights are well , all the human rights are doing well "education for free for everybody ,water for all the people ,opportunities of work for all the young men "they do not know what other right invent that they has a free local wifi internet network in all their cities , it mean the right to the information .
I LIKE IT VERY MUCH. VERY GOOD JOB!
ResponderEliminarPLEASE CHECK AND CORRECT THE WORDS IN BRACKETS, CAN BE PUNCTUATION OR THE VERB OR IS MISSING SOMETHING.
The social injustice is not just (if) the rich people take or use the money of the citizens or (may be) the poor people , also it is when our problems does not matter to the politicians ,when the people that should to fight (by) our rights and (by) us are stealing money ,the money that have to be use() for schools ,better education and for free( ,) hospitals ,etc...
All the people usually guess that the social injustice is when the powerful and rich men take the money of the workers ,normal people or poor people . And may be these persons are in the correct ( ) ,but also the social injustice can be against the rich people ,an example (is) Venezuela . Here , the government take() the money and the companies of the businessmen , after they give a little part of the money to the poor people and the other part (is) go() to be in the wallet of the politicians (,) it is bad too , because the rich people ( ) have (not) the fault that some persons does not have money ,they (won) all they have with their work(s) ,we cant take their money and give () to the citizens . But the other reality is that ( ) are people that don t have nothing ,why?, because
( ) are politicians that steal the money that the rich men (pale) to the government to help the poor men .
So , in the world (exist) two extremes :the government that take() the money of the rich men and the politicians that steal the money of the poor men .
These two extremes are so bad ,but between these two i have an other idea , an other reality , a reality where the rich people have the money that they (won) (with) their work , where the politicians fight (by) us and does not steal the money , where the help that we have to the poor persons is (go) to be use() in education and other things we need . This idea can be real just if we give our future to GOD ,if we pray .
The social injustice is too when all the people (doesn`t) have the same opportunities , opportunities to the education , water , food , a family , opportunities to know about GOD .In my opinion all the persons should (to) have the same opportunities (,) if a person can (pale) betters opportunities that is good , i agree , but if other people cant (pale) a better opportunity i (thing) that the government (have) to give to these people basics opportunities , an example is (French) . In this country all the human rights are well ( ) , all the human rights are doing well "education for free for everybody ,water for all the people ,opportunities of work() for all the young men "they do(es) not know what other right invent that they (has) a free local wifi () internet network in all their cities , it mean the right to the information .
Hey Matthew.
ResponderEliminarVery good job with your blog. I liked the information it gave me about social injustice. It has some grammar mistakes to be corrected on. But other than that, very good job, I liked the pic too. Understood the blog and enjoyed it.
JFS.
( Andres Espitia, ACEA)
ResponderEliminarI agree whit you, you have a nice information, you give real examples and for that you convince us.In especial I like it because you give me a case of social injustice, and understood what you mean, ooh and the picture help.
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In my opinion the goverment should dismiss the corrupt people to conserve the money and help the poor people we can do it looking and electing honest people.
ResponderEliminarI like the idea because it is true be a rich man isn't bad, the bad thing is became rich whit the money of the people the money of the taxes the thing is that the politicians most help the poor people but the steal all.
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ResponderEliminarI like the information you have, I like the idea because it talks about what is and what he says is true and i like more because it says that we help praying and relating to God with this topic
ResponderEliminarI am agre because the goberment take the money that the people give from taxation and help like the help for victims of the winter... So they take the money and din't use it to it pupose and the money of taxation should be used to make schools hospitals and help the people
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